tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2612757612475780832.post3776596127427977089..comments2016-09-20T23:56:44.591-07:00Comments on ♥Katie's blog♥: Writing sampleAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17304736463719323935noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2612757612475780832.post-26440048590999593242015-09-16T00:18:30.098-07:002015-09-16T00:18:30.098-07:00Katie, I love your introduction. So full of acti...Katie, I love your introduction. So full of action, and talking in the 'now' makes it very suspenseful and adds a sense of urgency. The story feels like you put all your creativity in at the beginning, and the end didn't have as much WOW! Maybe you could have added more detail to how Tweety freed Tom from the cage so the story ended with as much impact as it started. Looking forward to seeing more writing from you Katie!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2612757612475780832.post-16421436680468100632015-09-09T14:38:54.874-07:002015-09-09T14:38:54.874-07:00Well Done! Katie your ideas and detail put into yo...Well Done! Katie your ideas and detail put into your story you have a beginning a middle and a ending as well. Well Done! :)<br /><br />GraceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com